This game is so interesting and weird. I love the spinning red pattern as a background and the way the screens transition looks awesome. One thing I noticed is that when you drag the word around to feed to the guy, it doesn’t really matter where you drop it - even if you put it super far away it still feeds it to him. I do think the line could be a little smoother, because right now, it’s clear that the line is made up of lots and lots of circles if you draw quickly. Also, this is sort of nitpicky, but you can kinda go ham drawing whatever you want if it’s outside the stencil, which I’m not sure was your intention. But yeah, I really like this, good job!
It is really hard for me to draw the letters using the touchpad but I kept trying because this is really fun to play. I also like how you introduce the game at the beginning, the way of telling the story is really appealing. I think one suggestion I would make is that maybe you can add some more stories behind (if there were more time given), because I am expecting the words I write could indicate something and maybe I can get out of this world. Overall I like this game a lot, nice job!
I really enjoy how you combine drawing letters and feeding the "pet" together in this game. I didn't want to skip the intro because it was so fun. The art style is intense. As for critique, I would suggest that besides drawing letters, you could add typing letters and words. I guess more mechanics will make it more fun, but your mechanics are already incredible. Nice work!
I really enjoy playing this game! The Art style is strong. The drawing machine is fun. The transition is really smooth. The head animation is really impressed. I think his mouth movements somethings match his words, which is amazing. The collision detection for letter "G" and "D" has some problem. For G, the lower part has some wrong collision detections, but players can finish it by just drawing the upper part. For "D", players can finish by it only drawing the top part. Overall this is a really fun game! Great work!
I love this. I love how the dialogue and head move, I love the use of pixelation, although I wish there was a way for it to be more consistent, like the text matching the pixelation of the face, but honesty it still works. I love the humor. I love the pauses. I love the gameplay, the linerenderer looks great! You made the movement work really well, and the collision detection just works (except for the letter G). Are the words randomly generated? If so, that's amazing. The transitions and movement are great. My one critique is that it needs a full screen button because some of the dialogue gets cut off. Also you can color outside of the letters. It reminds me a bit of my game, INK, but even weirder. Great work!
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This game is so interesting and weird. I love the spinning red pattern as a background and the way the screens transition looks awesome. One thing I noticed is that when you drag the word around to feed to the guy, it doesn’t really matter where you drop it - even if you put it super far away it still feeds it to him. I do think the line could be a little smoother, because right now, it’s clear that the line is made up of lots and lots of circles if you draw quickly. Also, this is sort of nitpicky, but you can kinda go ham drawing whatever you want if it’s outside the stencil, which I’m not sure was your intention. But yeah, I really like this, good job!
It is really hard for me to draw the letters using the touchpad but I kept trying because this is really fun to play. I also like how you introduce the game at the beginning, the way of telling the story is really appealing. I think one suggestion I would make is that maybe you can add some more stories behind (if there were more time given), because I am expecting the words I write could indicate something and maybe I can get out of this world. Overall I like this game a lot, nice job!
I really enjoy how you combine drawing letters and feeding the "pet" together in this game. I didn't want to skip the intro because it was so fun. The art style is intense. As for critique, I would suggest that besides drawing letters, you could add typing letters and words. I guess more mechanics will make it more fun, but your mechanics are already incredible. Nice work!
I really enjoy playing this game! The Art style is strong. The drawing machine is fun. The transition is really smooth. The head animation is really impressed. I think his mouth movements somethings match his words, which is amazing. The collision detection for letter "G" and "D" has some problem. For G, the lower part has some wrong collision detections, but players can finish it by just drawing the upper part. For "D", players can finish by it only drawing the top part. Overall this is a really fun game! Great work!
I love this. I love how the dialogue and head move, I love the use of pixelation, although I wish there was a way for it to be more consistent, like the text matching the pixelation of the face, but honesty it still works. I love the humor. I love the pauses. I love the gameplay, the linerenderer looks great! You made the movement work really well, and the collision detection just works (except for the letter G). Are the words randomly generated? If so, that's amazing. The transitions and movement are great. My one critique is that it needs a full screen button because some of the dialogue gets cut off. Also you can color outside of the letters. It reminds me a bit of my game, INK, but even weirder. Great work!